My skin was trembling with fear.My spine was shattering while I entered this place.”HELP!!!”I cried sounds were around me.I saw eyes glaring at me.The rain went drip,drip,DRIP until I ran but I tripped over a branch “HELP,HELP” I said. No one heard me except one person, it was my dad.I stayed up all night with a smile on my face.

We are a group of P6 pupils from Hillhead Primary School in Kirkintilloch. The purpose of this site is to share our writing with other pupils in East Dunbartonshire Council. We look forward to receiving feedback about our stories and poems.                                                                         

Thankyou for reading our work, we hope that you enjoy it!

Coner, Lewis, Hannah, Emma, Robyn, Lyndsay Declan and Megan. 

DRIP, DRIP, DRIP as I was looking round the dim, spooky, shadowy forest. All I could hear was twit twoo, help and screaming coming from the other side of the forest. So I got really scared, and I started walking back the way I came, but there was so many different ways, I cant remember the way I came in because I was so scared. My breathing was very loud, I think it would fill up half the forest. I kept walking along and I saw some animals, I saw a rabbit, squirels and an owl.                                                                

My skin was crawling with fear as I was walking through the dark forest. Thankfuly I had my torch as I was walking I tripped over a stone AWOOO and my torch went flying SMASH!! ‘OH NO’!! I gasped.”How am I supposed to get through the dark and misty forest now?”. The mist was like a swirling tornado. Suddenly a big gust of wind blew me off my feet. Behind the trees there were howling sounds I shivered.

I heard footsteps they where getting closer and closer the bushes began to rusttle BOO!! DAD you gave me a fright…

DRIP,DRIP,DRIP!!!!!!! I heard a noise and it sounded like a giant and it got louder, louder and LOUDER!!! and then out came a Big bear and I ran and ran then I saw a sharp tree. I shouted “Help” and i shouted “Ahhhhh!!!the bear is going to eat me”. It was chasing me”Ha Ha Ha, you run now”. his teeth are sharp as a tree and I fell  over a tree and I got away from the bear.When I was running thougth it was getting dark and dark then the trees scratch my face and it smells awful. I got home and I took a bath and I went to bed.

DRIP, DRIP, DRIP….

I heard that sound again, that horrible, skin crawling sound it was coming from behind me i didn’t want to turn around I was just focusing on my old aunt Maureens wooden, damp house it was straight ahead on a hill, I still could hear the dripping sound i slightly turned my head to the right it stopped then i quickly turned my head to the left as i did i tripped up. When i tripped to run something was stopping me it was the sound of russiling i turned. Thankfully it was just my aunt Maureen on her bike I followed her to her house but she could not see me it was as if i was invisible. There was something about that forest, something to creepy to be true, even up to this day i wonder did my aunt Maureen see me or not…. 

My skin was crawling with fear. This place that I was in was very spooky. I could hear AWOOO, it was very scary. I could also hear drip, splash and the wind. I turned back and I started walking away but I couldn’t because there was so many ways to go. I started to get even more scared. I took a look at all the paths and I chose one but it was the wrong path. The path that I chose was full of bats, spiders, wolves and tall trees. I felt very scared now because I was all alone.

Shivering and scared as you run though the the damp, rooted ground.You can feel the wind, sharp edges of trees and lots of little spiders. Wolves, spiders and snakes all chase you as you run . Every animal is scared of  the forest because they shall die . Drips of rain hit your head. Mist is all around you. Dead roots and leaves go “crack, crack, crack”,as you fall over.The sounds and smells will make your bones jump. Spider webs and creepy bats will give you the worst nightmare you’ve ever had. Mud will sink into your shoes but if you run fast it wont. As it starts to rain there are really horrible smells. Like out of date cheese and rotting meat. Freezing and cold will make you fearful.When you get home you will never want to go back.OR WILL YOU????

I screamed, I had felt something crawling up my neck as I approched the house. It seemed as if the dark, spooky trees had eyes that saw every move I made.The wind hustled and bashed about howling like wolves. It was dead the only sign of life were crows and spiders. The crows were as black as a crumbling peice of coal,the spiders were as creepy as a lioness stocking its pray. The house looks as if it were alive and if I listened closely I could hear a creepy voice laughing. All of a sudden someone started screaming it just wouldn’t stop. As I rang the doorbell it squeaked open……..

We are a group of P6 pupils from Hillhead Primary School, Kirkintilloch. Please read our stories, poetry and descriptions then let us know what you think!

We look forward to reading your comments,

Coner, Emma, Lyndsay, Robyn, Megan, Lewis, Declan and Hannah.