BMW poem
Tuesday September 18th 2007, 8:42 am
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Its a powerful fast blue car,
A shiny sports car.
A metallic, silvery, blue car.
The rich rubber cruises along the road.
The eye sparkle in the night like stars.
By Ben
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* your poem was very good
* you described the car very well
wish: It could be a bit longer
Comment by*- We think you used alot of good adjectives.
*- We like your idea of BMW.
Signed Caitlin and Rachael
Comment by*-You have very good adjectives.
Comment by*-you have described the bmw very very well.
WiSh-your poem is a bit short more lines would be better.
*star* amazing adjectives
Comment by*star* good spelling
?wish? no wish
*- you used great adjectives
Comment by*- you must have thought hard on this
? no wish
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