HELP ALLIGATOR JUST ATE MY ARM!
Thursday November 08th 2007, 6:23 am
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Factory worker, Frankie Mcdonald age 33 was on holiday with his wife Fiona,when he got his arm bit off by a alligator.His wife said he was detterment to get his arm back. On wednesday 21st july, the day after it happend,he was happy because, it was the day they would cut open the alligator and get his arm back
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