HELP…AN ALLIGATOR JUST ATE MY ARM
Thursday November 08th 2007, 6:23 am
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Factory owner Alex McMillan 29, got his arm bit of by an alligator after attempting to wrestle it, we spoke to him after he recoverd on sunday 12th October he said ”I was trying to be like my hero Steve Irwin.” Later on that month McMillan got put in a mental home they said ”McMillan is dignosed with ultra alligator,” he also got a £50 fine for damaging the alligators teeth.
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* we think your poem or story is very good and specially the part at the end
* your punctuation was good
! you could say more about the story/poem itself
chloe and mark
Comment by*+*+..STAR..+*+* – It is very funny the second line, till the last line!
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?!?!WISH!?!? – We would like to read on more because it is that good – could you make it a bit longer ?!
Comment by* good adjectives
* funny story
wish: could you make it make more sense
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Comment bystar – good quotes
wish – make it longer next time please!
*-this is a good piece of work that this peron has written.
Comment by*-You have good adjectives in this story and I like the bits when you put the date in it.
wish-mabye next time you could make it a bit longer.
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